darlingdeathbird
06 March 2010 @ 09:30 pm
I've been waiting a while for He's There's 100th review on FF.net and it finally came today. Actually, it's nuts; today alone I got 2 reviews, 2 favorites, and 1 alert. Jesus.

This 100th review was special though, because it came from an articulate person who actually had something to say. I've made sure to pm them to say thanks, although I tend to do that with most reviews.

You have a very clear and distinct voice, and you write from the viewpoint of a highschooler wonderfully. The way the characters interact with each other makes me flash back to high school and the way I interacted with my friends. Everything, from the way the school is portrayed to the conversations and mindsets of the characters, to the strange story and Lily's way of mentally dealing with her situation, is fascinatingly realistic. I also like how "Erik" is not overly romanticized, but deeply flawed, imperfect, and potentially unstable... as he should be. I think you have real potential to be a published author someday...with your wonderful way of portraying the thoughts and insecurities of high school, maybe write some teen lit?

In short, great story. You're going on my favorites list. Keep it up!


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It's also on its way to having 10,000 hits. o_o

I know those things shouldn't matter much, but I do think they mean something. The hits mean people are seeing the story and reading it. The reviews mean they care enough to say so.

Also, my beta is too kind. Oh gosh.

I'm looking forward, when there is time, to doing the next chapter. Some things happen I'm just dying to share.
 
 
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