You must know, I don't normally review a story if it's this long already, but I just had to tell you I have fallen in love with it. I know that while I have read many great stories on this site, few I can say I would read many times and never get tired of and your story is already one of those.

I love it all, from the characters, to the gift you have to write such amazing chapters that just keep the reader wanting more and more, well this could very well be a novel that way it goes. I guess the thing that makes me like the story so much is the fact that I can relate to Lily, a lot. That she is often on a world of her own rather then this one, that she whished her life was more interesting, those were some of the things I immediately started to notice and that made me want to continue reading.

The way you expertly portray how her feelings change over of how she's just truly just curious of who leaves her these mystery notes, to feeling afraid of being in the presence of the Phantom at first, especially after what she saw in the bathroom, to how she has come to realise that she has fallen for him, not even caring anymore who he is under the mask.

Mariam is a very good character and while it would be better that she could understand her friend it's also quite good that she's really the voice of reason of how she doesn't trust the Phantom at all.

With Paulina, I have a feeling she's more like Madam Giry than she lets on, after all there must be, to me at least, a very good reason of why her phone number was in his contacts list at all.

Wow this must be one of the longest reviews I have written for a while. I really wonder why this story doesn't have more reviews and favorites, but I can definitely tell you from now own I will be waiting for an update, since, like I said, your story is worthy to be a novel and I inmensely enjoyed reading it.

Never stop writing if it's something you love, I hope you have many more ideas and that you keep on writing.

Love, V.D.