I have hardly any time to post this!
I need to get my ass down to the kitchen and down some coffee cuz I'm so tired and we got places to be in an hour.
I guess I just wanted to ask for advice. I got Luna's opinion last night, and a great part of me agrees with her, the other is as indecisive as ever.
He's There is getting close to reaching 100 pages. The intended format of this book is that it's a teenager's chronicles. Part of the excitement to me is that it's happening real-time, she has a life sorta, the relationship develops as fast as is rational for the most part, (though I guess the roleplay alters some parts of rationality). By the time she and him are completely obsessed, it has worked up to that and it doesn't seem fake.
At the same time, I have self-critical myself plus the ff.net readers that make me worried. I wonder if my pace is too slow, that they'll get bored with it because it's not instant satisfaction. Should I go with it at this slow pace and expect it to be really long, or do I try to find reasonable ways to add up the intensity, in shorter time than usual? To me, I notice things getting worse. But again, I want these to be real people, not working for us. But at the same time they must!
Ok I really have to go now. Please let me know.
I need to get my ass down to the kitchen and down some coffee cuz I'm so tired and we got places to be in an hour.
I guess I just wanted to ask for advice. I got Luna's opinion last night, and a great part of me agrees with her, the other is as indecisive as ever.
He's There is getting close to reaching 100 pages. The intended format of this book is that it's a teenager's chronicles. Part of the excitement to me is that it's happening real-time, she has a life sorta, the relationship develops as fast as is rational for the most part, (though I guess the roleplay alters some parts of rationality). By the time she and him are completely obsessed, it has worked up to that and it doesn't seem fake.
At the same time, I have self-critical myself plus the ff.net readers that make me worried. I wonder if my pace is too slow, that they'll get bored with it because it's not instant satisfaction. Should I go with it at this slow pace and expect it to be really long, or do I try to find reasonable ways to add up the intensity, in shorter time than usual? To me, I notice things getting worse. But again, I want these to be real people, not working for us. But at the same time they must!
Ok I really have to go now. Please let me know.
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