Chapter 20, I felt, was poorly connected to the previous chapter, very abrupt (although I suppose the scene would be abrupt no matter what), and I was unhappy with the dialogue for several days before I got it to a place that felt okay. I leave things hanging at the end, which I guess is somewhat good...?

-But enough with that for now.
I'm proud to announce,
HT is my new longest story.

First it was SELS, 120pgs,
Wooden Light is at, technically, 123pgs, although it has been on hiatus a year and I'm just now doing some stuff for it to prepare for winter,
but HT with this last chapter has reached 125pgs, although I use a different font.
In arial, my normal font, it's 133pgs.

Yikes. :D
Only a third done, too.

Well, here is Chapter 20 for easy reading, since I've been too lazy to update the site.
( Chapter 20 - Insane )

PS: I REALLY must do that photoshoot... :< I could make a new layout with ittttt...