Part 4 is sixteen pages, twice as long as the average of the others, which is why it took me a day (or two) longer than I thought it would. I was running out of steam writing this much! I mean seriously, I wrote 41pgs in a week. lol It's freaking insane. If I could just have the ability to do that for HT, I could stop being behind.
Anyway... I didn't painstakingly add the intended italics to the posted version yet because I was hoping for opinions that I could use to fix it if anyone thought it needed fixing. I did a couple scenes out of order and I wasn't sure if it all flowed just right and was a satisfactory ending. I hope it's enjoyable, though, even if you have some critique! ♥
Never wrote H/H like that before. It's fun. :3
( A Hatter's Obligation - Part 4 )
Favorite Quote(s)
Their eyes appeared between shadows of items on shelves, looking for each other between isles, which lead to fast-motion chasing, until Hatter's coat-tail snagged a Santa display and the two were covering their mouths in front of an angry store clerk.
"Hah! You look like you're about to cry."
"Ahahghghgaha!" He giggled. "Well I was watching Oprah before you got here, and..."
"Oh, well that explains everything."
He looked up to the clock, glasses fogged, or perhaps he was only imagining it... the steamy bathroom mirror and sated moaning... "Oh dear God..." He voiced to the clock, on its way to reading 5:38.
Nearby was the comic-book Hatter had bought him, like a symbol of all his solitary orgasms.
"Christmas Eve, cookies, love - sounds about right." He pulled Hare down by the waist, who began to wriggle as Hatter kissed him sloppily all over the temple.
"What?! Wait a minute! We're not going to argue about this?" He tried to push Hatter away but his grip was too strong.
"Nnnope, I think we've argued enough this week," he answered, then pressed his lips back to Hare's forehead.
"But frankly, you and I could make more of a riot out of watching paint dry."
"It's about time." The Queen ended that sentence with a squint towards the sky. "I suppose I can make an exception. Wouldn't want them at my party doing that..."
accomplished